Why I’ve rewritten STRAIGHT TO YOU and what’s changed

Straight to You coverMy dad recently asked me why I’d rewritten STRAIGHT TO YOU. A perfectly valid question, to which I had two immediate answers…

  1. I still love the story but I hate the original version of the book.
  2. I think I’m a much better writer now than I was twenty years ago.

…but there’s more to it than that.

STRAIGHT TO YOU is the last of my pre-AUTUMN and pre-HATER novels to be brushed down and re-released. You might remember I did the same with TRUST a couple of years back, but STRAIGHT TO YOU is a different kettle of fish altogether. When I re-wrote TRUST I worked, to an extent, from the original manuscript. With STRAIGHT TO YOU, however, I didn’t go anywhere near the 1996 book. In the introduction to the 2014 edition I’ve written that ‘the title, the premise, a couple of scenes and the characters’ names are all that remain from the original,’ and that’s pretty much it. One of the beta-readers who’d read the original described the new book as ‘an impossible sequel’, and I think that’s an interesting way of looking at it.

The biggest thing that’s changed between the two versions of the book is me. As well as having a load of books under my belt, I’m a very different person from the dumb young bugger who started writing STRAIGHT TO YOU back in January 1994. I’m a husband and a dad now, I write for a living, I have bills and responsibilities, I’ve been through some great times and some very shitty times… When I look back at the original version of the book I’m amazed at how naïve it now feels. The characters are as flat and two-dimensional as I was back then, the relationships between them less plausible than the end of the world scenario they’re supposedly living through. I think that’s down to the fact that when I first wrote the book, I hadn’t really lived.

So what can you expect from the new version? Well, this time around, Steven and Sam are far removed from the sickeningly clichéd young, star-crossed lovers of the original. They’ve been around the block a few times. They’re married, and they’ve just lost a baby. They’re not in a good place. They have problems which feel more pressing than the impending end of the world. I’m not giving anything away when I tell you circumstances drive the two of them apart at the worst possible moment, and that the bulk of the book follows Steven’s journey to reach his wife before the very end of everything.

But that journey, for me, is the key reason why I’ve rewritten the book after so long. Steven now has a real purpose to his quest; it’s not just some gallant (and probably misguided) mad dash across the country to spend time with a woman he’s just met. There are tangible consequences to his every move – what he gains with one hand, he loses from the other. To me, STRAIGHT TO YOU now feels more realistic and much more emotional. It feels firmly rooted in the real world. I think it packs a real punch, and I can’t wait for folks to finally get to read it.

So there you go, Dad. There’s your answer.

The book’s out on 14 February, but you can pre-order signed copies direct from Infected Books by clicking here.

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  • KingJames1369

    Can’t wait to read this new and improved version.  Still love the old one, have the original PDF copy i bought at the same time as Trust and Autumn.  Thank you for all your put out there!

    A loyal Fan

  • John Fleming

    I didn’t realize this was a rewrite to a previous novel. None the less, I am a HUGE Moody fan. There’s something about the way you write, weather it be the structure, or how I feel a relationship with the characters, and become happy/sad/angry with them and their decisions, that I have never felt with other authors/books. The Autumn series is my favourite, hands down. Looking forward to giving this one a read!

  • KingJames1369 Thanks very much! Hope you enjoy the new version. It’s very, very different to that old pdf of yours!

  • David Moody

    Thank you, John. Hope you enjoy it!

  • George Morgan

    I’m looking forward to getting my hands on this, I hunted down a copy of the original after reading Hater and I agree with your self criticism there. Can’t wait!

  • David Moody

    Thanks George!